First of all , I am a curious person , I like to learn a lot.... to ask questions to know more about as many things as possible... I am interested in the work of others...
Finally , I am indeed determined .
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First and foremost, I am extremely curious. I love to learn and expand my knowledge. I do not hesitate to ask questions, volunteer to help others or be involved in others' work.
Moreover, I have a team spirit. Working in a group is, in my opinion, a brilliant idea as we can combine our thoughts to be as productive as possible and have a variety of ideas which all help in putting forward the best solution possible.
Furthermore, I am versatile - I adapt quickly and easily to diverse circumstances. As a student, I did a lot of internships and worked in a multitude of enterprises.
Additionally, I am persevering and will not go down without a fight. I am always up for challenges. After setting my goals, I do my best to achieve them to a level of perfection that leaves me satisfied.
Finally, I stay involved all the way through my clients' journeys, no matter the amount of effort required. During an internship in a financial company, I answered a client's questions for more than an hour.
Therefore, I strongly believe that I am well-suited for this job.
